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I wanted to not attend the party in many times, but it was no use to do it. because, whatever I said, senior officers think it is rude. They just think that we have to join the party even we are not in the mood. They sometimes pretend to understand our situation but that is not true. So, many of junior officers don't want to join the party but they have to. In this reason, the bad circulation is created. Senior want to make us attend meeting, but they don't like it. they are forced to attend it so they are't drinking much. That make senior think we haven't been close officers even for now!! so they want to make more this kind of party. the opinions which is about the party are not accepted in this group, juniors have started to think this way : It is our loss to talk about being absent in the party. because they don't consider our situation.

Hi there [이름]! I understand your point in this essay. I felt that way too before.We really need to be strong to be successful. We should think that these problems/ trials will make us a better person. Always think positive as you always say. Talk to you in class. Thank you very much for doing your homework. Good night. Take a lot of rest. Teacher Nina   I wanted to not attend the party in many times, but it was no use to do it. >> I wanted not to attend the party many times, but it is useless to do it. because, whatever I said, senior officers think it is rude. >> Because whatever I may say, senior officers will think that I am rude. >> OR: Because whatever my reason will be, the senior officer will think I am rude. They just think that we have to join the party even we are not in the mood. >> Correct They sometimes pretend to understand our situation but that is not true. >> Correct So, many of junior officers don\'t want to join the party but they have to. >> So, many junior officers don\'t wnat to join the party but they have to. In this reason, the bad circulation is created. >> Did you mean: In this case, bad impression is created. >> OR: In this case, bad feelings are created.Senior want to make us attend meeting, but they don\'t like it. >> Seniors want us to attend meetings, but they don\'t like it.they are forced to attend it so they are\'t drinking much. >> They are forced to attend it, so they drink a lot. That make senior thinkwe haven\'t been close officers even for now!! >> Did you mean: That makes seniors think that we are not close as officers until now. >> OR: That makes senior thinks that we are not having a good relationship until now.so they want to make more this kind of party. >> So, they want to have more parties like this. >> OR: So, they prefer to have more parties. the opinions which is about the party are not accepted in this group, juniors have started to think this way : It is our loss to talk about being absent in the party. >> Did you mean: The opinions of juniors about the party are not accepted, they have to start thinking this way: It is our loss if we are absent in the party. because they don\'t consider our situation. >> Correct >> OR: Because they are not that considerate about our situation.