Exercise
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1. Do you exercise? Why or why not?
- I always do exercise since 2016. I was more obese and had many problems like dyspnea, chest pain, knee and ankle pain, high blood sugar. And I was fatigue everyday.
So I decided to do exercise to survive. In the beginning, I couldn\'t do any exercise. So my personal trainer said \"There is nothing that you can do exercise\"
Now I can many kinds of weight training and I don\'t feel fatigue in the morning.
I do exercise to improve my health.
2. What do you get from exercise and why is it important?
Exercise gives people the health of both body and mind.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
I always do exercise since 2016.
>>CORRECT!
I was more obese and had many problems like dyspnea, chest pain, knee and ankle pain, high blood sugar.
>>CORRECT!
And I was fatigue everyday.
>>And I had fatigue everyday.
So I decided to do exercise to survive.
>>CORRECT!
In the beginning, I couldn\'t do any exercise.
>>CORRECT!
So my personal trainer said \"There is nothing that you can do exercise\"
>>So my personal trainer said \"There is nothing that you can do to exercise\"
Now I can many kinds of weight training and I don\'t feel fatigue in the morning.
>>Now I do can many kinds of weight training and I don\'t feel fatigue in the morning.
I do exercise to improve my health.
>>CORRECT!
Exercise gives people the health of both body and mind.
>>CORRECT!
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