Exercise
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Would you join the marathon in the future?
I will not join the marathon. I have a flat feet. So I can\'t walk and run for a long time.
How do you keep yourself fit and healthy?
I do exercise like weight and pilates evereday and ride a indoor bicyle for 1hours.
I take multivitamin in the everymorning.
In spite of these my effort, I am not healthy.
To be healthy, I should lose body weight. I can\'t stand desires to eat delicious food.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
I will not join the marathon.
>>CORRECT!
I have a flat feet.
>>CORRECT!
So I can\'t walk and run for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
I do exercise like weight and pilates evereday and ride a indoor bicyle for 1hours.
>>I do exercise like weight and pilates evereday and ride an indoor bicyle for 1 hour.
I take multivitamin in the everymorning.
>>I take multivitamins every morning.
In spite of these my effort, I am not healthy.
>>I take multivitamins every morning.
In spite of these my effort, I am not healthy.
>>In spite of these efforts, I am not healthy.
To be healthy, I should lose body weight.
>>CORRECT!
I can\'t stand desires to eat delicious food.
>>CORRECT!
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