exercise
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when it is winter. I want to eat food at midnight. It is my habit.
Of Person are getting older. muscle of him are getting decreasing.
I like to exercise at gym. I lift up heavy dumbell. and I run over 5 km . I almost exercise about 2 hour.
so I hurt leg, shoulder etc.
My doctor told me to do little exercise
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Hello Sir [이름]. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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when it is winter. I want to eat food at midnight. >> When it is winter, I want to eat food at midnight.
It is my habit.
>> correct
Of Person are getting older. muscle of him are getting decreasing.
Of Person are getting older. muscle of him are getting decreasing.
>> As a person gets older, his muscles start to deteriorate.
I like to exercise at gym.
>> I like to exercise at the gym.
I lift up heavy dumbell. and I run over 5 km .
>> I lift heavy dumbbell and I run for over 5 kilometers.
I almost exercise about 2 hour. so I hurt leg, shoulder etc.
>> I exercise for almost 2 hours a day so I injure my legs, shoulders, etc.
My doctor told me to do little exercise
>> OR: My doctor told me to do light exercises.
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