Exercise vs Drugs to treat high blood pressure and reduce body fat
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1. Do you find this article helpful?
Yes. I got some information about the helpful effect of exercise.
>> CORRECT
2. What do you think of the idea that exercise can be considered medicine?
I think it could be depend on the person who had been prescribed.
>> I think it would depend on the person who had been prescribed.
Not as drugs, the exercise cannot measure consciously.
>> CORRECT
For example 30 min walk prescription cannot apply same to each people because each people don\'t have same basic metabolic burning and it is uncertain that some people really running or not.
>> For example, a 30 min walk-in prescription cannot apply the same to each people. Because, each people don\'t have same basic metabolic system and it is uncertain that some people really runs or not.
3. Do you like exercising? How often do you exercise?
I like exercise but cannot specified what I like some sports. I just like going around and moving my bodies not just lying all day at home.
>> I like working out. But, I cannot specify what sports I like. I just like going around and moving my body and not just lying all day at home.
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