Exercise your writing skill.Write about the things that annoy you so much
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Hi [이름] ^^
How are you?
Thank you so much for doing your homework. I really appreciate it.
Wow! Now, I know what really annoys you so much. You are quite
sensitive when it comes to food ingredients. Well we have to be
conscious about it though because we don\'t know if it is good or bad to
our health. ^^ So, we have to be careful of the food we intake. ^^
And [이름], don\'t worry about losing the game. Just do your best nextime. ^^
Anyways, I hope to see you in my class [이름].
Take care always and have a great day ahead^^
~~Teacher Liza
<bad ingredient food>
I don\'t eat some bad ingredient food.
>>Correct
>>OR:I don\'t eat some food with bad ingredients.
Sometimes I eat bad ingredient food, but I eat many good ingredient food.
>>Correct
>>OR:Sometimes I eat food with bad ingredients but I eat much more food with good ingredients.
Because I have atopy. So, my mom look for the food ingredien.
>>Because I have an atopy, my mom is conscious of the food ingredients.
Sometimes I eat cracker or pizza,ice cream.
>>Sometimes I eat crackers,pizza or icecream.
The synthetic sweetnert
>>The synthetic sweetener
synthetic sweetnert,combined congener is not good for health.
>>Synthetic sweeteners, combined with congeners are not goog for the health.
But sometimes I like to eat. Because it is a little delicious.
>>But sometimes I like to eat it because it is a little bit delicious.
So, the bad ingredient food is annoy me so much.
>>So, food with bad ingredients annoys me so much.
<Diary>
Wednesday,Setember 17th 2014 a little cold
<hold demonstration classes>
Today, was P.E. hold demonstration class.
>>This day was my P.E. hold demonstration class.
At 4th class we went to the school\'s gym.
>>During our 4th class, we went to the school gym.
>>OR: In our 4th class, we went to the school gym.
My mom came to the hold demonstration class.
>>Correct
We learnred how to do horse vault.
>>We learned how to do the horse vault.
It was so easy.
>>Correct
>>OR: It was a piece of cake.
Lastly, we did horse vault relay game.
>>Lastly, we did the horse vault relay game.
We lose the game.
>>Correct
>>OR: We did not win the game.
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