Exercising with other people
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Exercising with other people is more fun than alone. When I exercised alone, I easily stopped and rested long time. When I exercised with other people, however, I endured working out to the end. The mind that we are doing together is critical. It makes our own appointment and manners. It\'s like crowd psychology. Therefore, sometimes I overexercise when working out with other people. Even though I like exercising with other people, because I can do my best and maximum. It\'s wonderful that knowing my hidden ability. The power of colleagueship gives us sense of beloging and self-esteem.
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>> Exercising with other people is more fun than doing it alone.
When I exercised alone, I easily stopped and rested long time.
>> When I exercised alone, I easily stopped and rested for long time.
When I exercised with other people, however, I endured working out to the end.
>> CORRECT.
The mind that we are doing together is critical.
>> The thought that we are doing it together is critical.
It makes our own appointment and manners.
>> CORRECT.
It\'s like crowd psychology.
>> CORRECT.
Therefore, sometimes I overexercise when working out with other people.
>> CORRECT.
Even though I like exercising with other people, because I can do my best and maximum.
>> I like exercising with other people because I can do my best at the maximum.
It\'s wonderful that knowing my hidden ability.
>> It\'s wonderful knowing my hidden ability.
The power of colleagueship gives us sense of beloging and self-esteem.
>> The power of colleagueship gives us sense of belonging and self-esteem.
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