Expactation of this class
학생이 쓴 원문
I have enrolled this class to learn various English business expression. I want to speack English more fluently and with confidence. With this business book, I believe I can practice English conversation related to my work.
Sometimes I feel so tired after work, so I was thinking about postponing class and take a rest, but I will never give up! I want to speack English like you.
강사 첨삭
Hi So [이름]!
I want to acknowledge all of your expectations.
Thank you for doing your composition.
Take note of the suggestions below.
Let\'s make sure that you would be better than when you started.
Let\'s open our doors for new learning and possibilities.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have enrolled this class to learn various English business expression.
>> I enrolled in this class to learn various English business expressions.
I want to speack English more fluently and with confidence.
>> I want to speak English more fluently and with confidence.
With this business book, I believe I can practice English conversation related to my work.
>> With this business book, I believe I can practice English conversations related to my work.
Sometimes I feel so tired after work, so I was thinking about postponing class and take a rest, but I will never give up!
Sometimes I feel so tired after work, so I was thinking about postponing class and take a rest, but I will never give up!
>> Sometimes, I feel so tired after work, so I think about postponing my class and taking a rest, but I will never give up!
I want to speack English like you.
>> I want to speak English the way you do.
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