expectation from the class and you.

2022-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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First my expectation from the class is getting a good score from SPA test in my company. So, during the class, I want to learn how to speak naturally and fluently.(including stress, intonation..) Second expectation is that you will motivate me to continue studying english. Because my conditions of life have changed a lot. I\'m no longer a student and I don\'t have much time to study english as well.

강사 첨삭

Hi Harry!
You\'re really making an effort and I really appreciate that.
I think we should be productive in the usage of our time.
Writing can help you hone your skills a lot faster.
Just stay consistent.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First my expectation from the class is getting a good score from SPA test in my company.
>> First, my expectation from the class is to work hard to get a good score in the SPA test in my company.
So, during the class, I want to learn how to speak naturally and fluently.(including stress, intonation..)
>> Correct
Second expectation is that you will motivate me to continue studying english.
>> The second expectation is that you will motivate me to continue studying English.
Because my conditions of life have changed a lot. 
>> It\'s because the conditions in my life have changed a lot. 
I\'m no longer a student and I don\'t have much time to study english as well.
>> I\'m no longer a student and I don\'t have much time to study English.

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