expectation in class and teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I want to be a influent speaker of english, because if I go abroad, communication with others in english is important.
second, I need [이름]imum 6.5 scores in IELTS test. In the test, I want to talk with no hesitation.
Third, when I talk in engish, my brain usually operates grammar. it makes me time delay,,, how can I solve it?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today.
Your expectations are noted.
Let\'s work together to achieve our goals.
Please review the corrections below.
Ask during the class if you have any questions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First of all, I want to be a influent speaker of english, because if I go abroad, communication with others in english is important.
>> First of all, I want to be fluent in speaking in English because if I go abroad, communicating with others using English is important.
second, I need [이름]imum 6.5 scores in IELTS test.
second, I need [이름]imum 6.5 scores in IELTS test.
>> Second, I need a [이름]imum score of 6.5 on the IELTS test.
In the test, I want to talk with no hesitation.
>> During the test, I want to talk with no hesitation.
Third, when I talk in engish, my brain usually operates grammar.
Third, when I talk in engish, my brain usually operates grammar.
>> Third, when I speak in English, my brain usually analyzes grammar rules.
it makes me time delay,,,
>> It causes delay when I say something.
how can I solve it?
>> How can I improve on this?
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