Expecting Day
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Hello Debby
Oh, I can feel that I didn't do well in the class today.\I understood your word and was going to respond properly. But it seemed that did not well. I will take part in the class more enthusiastically next time.
I always use a book to study. I would use an internet service to study but I only study with a book these days. No matter what we study, reading is the most simple way to obtain a knowledge, I think. But it needs much more patience than the other ways, I feel. Just looking at book make me sleepy so I should try to stay awake for studying. It's really hard for me.
And I'm goind to study TOEIC rather than ESL. If I can go study abroad, I will prepare for ESL. But I can't afford to study abroad. After finishing TOEIC first, I will think slowly about learing ESL. There's always sequence.
<Essay>
As what I know is right, Samsung is the most successful company at least in Korea. Their elctronics are widely exported abroad. Their asset is also very huge.
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Hi there [이름]^^
Are you having a great day?
Don\'t wory about class. I think you did oaky. It\'s not always the energetic class but we manage to finish and discuss
something that is significant.
You are already doing ESL with me. It might not seem much for now but within the time that you will spend with me, you would have
practiced basic skills in ESL. The fact that you can converse with me means that you have the basic skills already.
Just a few more things to improve which is of course within your control.^^
Cheer up! You are doing great.^^
I also think that Samsung is a brand that your country must be proud of. My country is one fan of your product.
Take care^^
I only had a few corrections. Look it up and I think it\'s just minor. See? you were great today.^^
T. Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hello Debby
>> CORRECT
Or> Hi Debby^^Oh, I can feel that I didn\'t do well in the class today.
>> CORRECT
OR> I think that I did not do my best in class today.
I understood your word and was going to respond properly.
>> CORRECT
OR> I got what you were telling me and I was suppose to answer properly.
But it seemed that did not well.
>> But it seemed that I did not do well.
I will take part in the class more enthusiastically next time.>> CORRECT
OR> I will participate better next time.I always use a book to study.
>> CORRECT
OR> I always have a book when I study.
I would use an internet service to study but I only study with a book these days.
>> CORRECT
OR> I have internet but I prefer to have the book with me.
No matter what we study, reading is the most simple way to obtain a knowledge, I think.
>> CORRECT
OR> For me, having a book to read is the best way to learn.
But it needs much more patience than the other ways, I feel.
>> CORRECT
OR> I feel that we must be patient more that ever.
Just looking at book make me sleepy so I should try to stay awake for studying.
>> Just looking at book makes me sleepy so I should try to stay awake for studying.
It\'s really hard for me.
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s difficult for me.And I\'m goind to study TOEIC rather than ESL. If I can go study abroad, I will prepare for ESL.
>> And I\'m going to study TOEIC rather than ESL. If I can study abroad, I will prepare for ESL.
But I can\'t afford to study abroad.
>> CORRECT
OR> I do not have enough to study abroad.
After finishing TOEIC first, I will think slowly about learing ESL. There\'s always sequence.>> CORRECT
OR> I will consider ESL after studying TOEIC.<Essay>As what I know is right, Samsung is the most successful company at least in Korea.
>> CORRECT
OR> The way I see it, Samsung is a very successful company in Korea.
Their elctronics are widely exported abroad.
>> CORRECT
OR> Other countries import their products.
Their asset is also very huge.
>> Their asset is also huge.
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