Expensive activity part 2 #3
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2. What\'s the dif
I don\'t think there is a significant difference today. Women sometimes make extravagant purchases like vintage clothing or luxurious accessories. On the other hand, in the case of men, they usually prefer a costly watch or a mobile phone.
3. What are the advantages and disadvantages about being rich?
I think the most significant advantage of being rich is that you can make a priority from your preference, while poor people sometimes have to sacrifice their time or health. The disadvantage of being rich is that people are occasionally apt to belittle poor people. Some people often forget their past quickly.
4. Why are some sports expensive? Are they for everyone?
Some adventure sports are particularly expensive because they require limited licenses, specialized professionals, and costly safety equipments. Perhaps only a few people want to do extreme sports due to unexpected risks. Actually, there is no reason for everyone to play expensive and dangerous sports.
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2. What\'s the dif
I don\'t think there is a significant difference today. Women sometimes make extravagant purchases like vintage clothing or luxurious accessories.
>> correct
On the other hand, in the case of men, they usually prefer a costly watch or a mobile phone.
>> On the other hand, men typically prefer a costly watch or a mobile phone.
3. What are the advantages and disadvantages about being rich?
I think the most significant advantage of being rich is that you can make a priority from your preference, while poor people sometimes have to sacrifice their time or health.
>> I think the most significant benefit of being wealthy is that you can prioritize your preferences, whereas the financially challenged people sometimes have to sacrifice their time or even their health.
The disadvantage of being rich is that people are occasionally apt to belittle poor people. Some people often forget their past quickly.
>> Being well-off is not all sunshine and rainbows. Money might cause you to lose perspective; it could make you greedy and ruthless to those around you especially the poor. Some might even forget their past or where they came from when they get a taste of success or wealth.
4. Why are some sports expensive? Are they for everyone?
Some adventure sports are particularly expensive because they require limited licenses, specialized professionals, and costly safety equipments.
>> Some adventure sports are particularly expensive because they require limited licenses, specialized professionals, and costly safety equipment.
>> Note: There\'s no plural form for the word equipment, it\'s like information, whether you\'re talking about more than one or just one, it\'s still equipment or information.
Perhaps only a few people want to do extreme sports due to unexpected risks.
>> or: Perhaps those that want to do extreme sports are in the minority due to unexpected risks or hidden dangers involved.
Actually, there is no reason for everyone to play expensive and dangerous sports.
>> or: As far as I\'m concerned, risking your life for a sport or activity doesn\'t make any sense at all.
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