Expensive gift
학생이 쓴 원문
I gave shoes to my friend. It was expensive. But my friend liked it.
And I received the most expensive gift is digital piano that my mom gave me.
강사 첨삭
Wow! It seems that you are a generous friend, Emily! You must also be happy having that gift from your mom. Keep playing the piano!-Faith-
I gave shoes to my friend. >> CORRECT
It was expensive. But my friend liked it.
>> It was expensive but my friend liked it.
And I received the most expensive gift is digital piano that my mom gave me.
And I received the most expensive gift is digital piano that my mom gave me.
>> And the most expensive gift I received was a digital piano that my mom gave me.
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