Experience

2021-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I guess that I forgot the times I spent with them. It was passed long time, and besides I didn\'t have a lot of times with them. Elder siblings had to leave to a city to study from middle school, they were 13 old. Sometimes I remember the locah soup that my oldest brother cooked for me. And my second brother didn\'t play with me. I think we were busy each. There\'s a lot of age difference with my sisters. Anyway I think I don\'t have a memorable experience with my siblings specially.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [Name]! Thank you for responding to my question. I understand that it is quite hard to have a lot of time with siblings especially when you have big age gaps. Nevertheless, may your hopes for this year happen so you can meet them again, and your parents, too.

~ Teacher Marie
I guess that I forgot the times I spent with them.

>> I guess I forgot the times I spent with them.
It was passed long time, and besides I didn\'t have a lot of times with them.
>> It was a long time ago and besides, I didn\'t spend a lot of time with them.

Elder siblings had to leave to a city to study from middle school, they were 13 old.
>> My older siblings had to leave for another city in middle school; they were 13-year old students.

Sometimes I remember the locah soup that my oldest brother cooked for me.
>> Sometimes, I remember the loach soup that my eldest brother cooked for me. 

And my second brother didn\'t play with me.
>> And, my second brother didn\'t play with me.

I think we were busy each.
>> I think each of us were busy.

There\'s a lot of age difference with my sisters.
>> There are big age differences among me and my sisters.

Anyway I think I don\'t have a memorable experience with my siblings specially.

>> Anyway, I think I don\'t have a memorable experience with my siblings.

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