Explain how technology (like online menus or food delivery apps) has changed eating out.

2025-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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When eating out, people can order food with a phone or devices. They can pay money with that devices too. People don\'t have to go out to eat something. They can get food easily by u[이름]g delivery apps. It is easier than going outside.

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Explain how technology (like online menus or food delivery apps) has changed eating out.



When eating out, people can order food with a phone or devices.

>>> When eating out, people can order food u[이름]g phones or other devices.

>>> OR: When dining out, people can order food through their mobile phones or electronic devices.


They can pay money with that devices too.

>>> They can pay with those devices, too.

>>> OR: Payments can be made through the same devices.


People don\'t have to go out to eat something.

>>> People don’t have to go out to eat.

>>> OR: Meals can be enjoyed at home without going out.


They can get food easily by u[이름]g delivery apps.

>>> They can easily get food by u[이름]g delivery apps.

>>> OR: Food can be ordered conveniently through delivery apps.


It is easier than going outside.

>>> OR: It’s more convenient than dining out.

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