Explain how to cook your favorite meal.
학생이 쓴 원문
My daughters like pasta. So I often cook pasta such as a tomato spaghetti or a cream spaghetti.
At first, I fry bacon and onion in melted butter. Then, I mix them with tomato sauce.
Then I cook the sauce with spaghetti in a frying pan. Finally, I sprinkle a little bit of parsley powder over it and the cooking is done. It becomes delicious tomato spaghetti and we enjoy eating it.
강사 첨삭
1. My daughters like pasta.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My daughters are fond of pasta.
2. So I often cook pasta such as a tomato spaghetti or a cream spaghetti.
>>So, I often cook pasta such as tomato spaghetti or cream spaghetti.
3. At first, I fry bacon and onion in melted butter.
>>At first, I fry the bacon and onion in melted butter.
4. Then, I mix them with tomato sauce.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Then, I add tomato sauce.
5. Then I cook the sauce with spaghetti in a frying pan.
>>Then, I cook the sauce with pasta in a frying pan.
6. Finally, I sprinkle a little bit of parsley powder over it and the cooking is done.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Finally, I sprinkle a little bit of parsley powder over it and it\'s done.
7. It becomes delicious tomato spaghetti and we enjoy eating it.
>>It is delicious tomato spaghetti and we enjoy eating it.
Thank You.
Happy weekend.
-T. Melody ^^
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