Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home in a maximum of 5 sentences..

2015-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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If some guests arrive at my home unexpectedly, I will prepare delicious food for guests first If I do not have enough time to prepare for food by myself, I can call catering service instead. I have not seen who do not like buffet. After enjoying food, we would like to play games together. For example, showing your talent as singing, dancing and so on. Nowadays, many young students in Korea dream to be an idol. We can watch so many audition programs are being showed in TV. The Korean wave is very popular in all over the world.

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Good day to you, [이름]! How are you doing? I am wishing that you are in a good condition right now. Thank you for lending some time to accomplish your homework. I appreciate your thoughts about the topic and I understood your ideas too. I would just like you to take note of the corrections for you to improve and enhance your writing skills. Nonetheless, you did a great job! Maybe, I will be one of the guests who will visit you there someday!! ^^ See you!   Teacher Carmen ^^   If some guests arrive at my home unexpectedly, I will prepare delicious food for guests first >> If some guests arrive at my home unexpectedly, I will prepare delicious food for them first. If I do not have enough time to prepare for food by myself, I can call catering service instead. >> If I do not have enough time to prepare the food by myself, I can call a catering service instead.   I have not seen who do not like buffet. >> I have not seen someone who doesn\'t like to eat in a buffet. After enjoying food, we would like to play games together. >> After enjoying the food, we would like to play games together.   For example, showing your talent as singing, dancing and so on. >> For example, showing your talent such as singing, dancing and so on. Nowadays, many young students in Korea dream to be an idol. >> Nowadays, many young students dream to be an idol in Korea.   We can watch so many audition programs are being showed in TV. >> We can watch so many audition programs which are being shown on TV.   The Korean wave is very popular in all over the world. >> The Korean wave is very popular all over the world.

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