Explain in a maximum of 5 sentences your opinion about global warming.

2015-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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Global warming is a social issue these days. We can feel the winter is not so cold compare to before. All of the people should take care of the environment. We can start to do small things in the surrounding to protect pollution. For example, do not pour trash anywhere, using eco bag when we go shopping not using plastic bag, we also try to take a tumbler, but not use paper cup when we drinking coffee. As long as we make effort to do our best, our living environment will be changed better.

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Good evening, [이름]! I agree with everything that you have said. I believe that we should always protect our environment to have a better future. Thank you for always doing your best to answer your homework. You did a good job! Keep it up! So, let us also help our environment by doing acts of kindness everywhere. See you soon!   Teacher Carmen ^^   Global warming is a social issue these days. >> Correct!   We can feel the winter is not so cold compare to before. >> It is not as cold as before during winter. All of the people should take care of the environment. >> Correct! OR>> Everybody should take care of the environment.  We can start to do small things in the surrounding to protect pollution. >> We can start doing small things to prevent having pollution in our surroundings. For example, do not pour trash anywhere, using eco bag when we go shopping not using plastic bag, we also try to take a tumbler, but not use paper cup when we drinking coffee. >> For example, we should not scatter our trash anywhere, we should use an eco bag whenever we are shopping instead of using a plastic bag, and we should also try to use a tumbler instead of using paper cups whenever we drink coffee. As long as we make effort to do our best, our living environment will be changed better. >>As long as we make effort to do our best, our environment will change for the better.

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