Explain the nightlife in your city.
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Hello [이름]! Good Day. Thank you for doing your homework. It is good to know about the night life in your city. Keep up the good work in all of your classes. Below are some corrections you should take note of.
-Teacher Sandy-
Night is more active than day in my city.
>> Correct.
Most cafe, bar, and game room are still open.
>> Most cafes, bars and game rooms are still open.
Many people hang out their time at night.
>>Many people hang out and spend their time at night.
Especially, in summer, night life has a lot of entertainments.
>> Especially in summer, because night life at this time would have lots of entertaining activities.
If you come here, you’d love it.
>> Correct.
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