Explain the saying \"Time is Gold.\"
학생이 쓴 원문
We need time to earn money. in other words, we need to time in order to earn gold.
Therefore, the time and gold is the same.
강사 첨삭
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We need time to earn money. in other words, we need to time in order to earn gold.
>> We need time to earn money; in other words, we need time in order to earn gold.
OR >>Time is essential for earning money, just as it is for accumulating gold.
Therefore, the time and gold is the same.
>> Therefore, time and gold are essentially the same.
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