explain what activity or activities you would enjoy doing in place of housework.
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Actually, I do not understand the question this time. But I believe that it asks me whether or not there are some activities I would enjoy instead of housework at home. If my thought is right, I can say that I would enjoy working out at home.
In my case, I used to go to the university early in ther morning and get home late at night. I do not have time to go fitness club for exersise; thus, I enjoy working out at home. It makes me save my time and my body also healthy. Besides, it helps to reduce my stress from schoolwork. Even though I cannot afford to do a strenuous one, it is enough helpful to me.
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Hello Miss [이름]!
Thank you for trying to answer the question even if it was not clear to you. Anyway, please go over my corrections for today. Have a good day! Take care!
~Kelly^^
Actually, I do not understand the question this time.
>> Correct.
But I believe that it asks me whether or not there are some activities I would enjoy instead of housework at home.
>> But I believe that the question asks whether there are some activities I would enjoy instead of housework.
If my thought is right, I can say that I would enjoy working out at home.
>> Correct.In my case, I used to go to the university early in ther morning and get home late at night.
>> In my case, I go to the university early in the morning and get home late at night.
I do not have time to go fitness club for exersise; thus, I enjoy working out at home.
>> I do not have time to go to a fitness club; thus, I enjoy working out at home.
It makes me save my time and my body also healthy.
>> It makes me save my time and my body is also healthy.
Besides, it helps to reduce my stress from schoolwork.
>> Correct.
Even though I cannot afford to do a strenuous one, it is enough helpful to me.
>> Even though I cannot afford do a strenuous exercise, it is helpful enough to me.
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