Explain what the meaning of \"Success\" is for you.
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In me, susccess is I do whatever I want. To succeed, I am trying to do my best. So that I need to study English hard, because I am a student and I am still learning.
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In me, susccess is I do whatever I want.
>> For me, success is doing whatever I want.
To succeed, I am trying to do my best.
>> To succeed, I have to try to do my best.
So that I need to study English hard, because I am a student and I am still learning.
>> So that means, I need to study English hard, because I am a student and I am still learning.
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