Explain why do you think mothers are heroes?
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It\'s indeed a splendid story about motherhood, Sir [이름]!
That was inspirational. Yes, we got ourselves superheroes, our parents. I\'m waiting for more compositions to come. See you around!
~Teacher Eunice
I didn\'t know why mothers give everything to their children even though they couldn\'t wear good clothes, have delicious food and purchase the things they would like to have before I got married.
>>> I didn\'t know why mothers give everything to their children even though they couldn\'t wear good clothes, have delicious food, and purchase the things they would like to have before they got married.
I can understand why our mothers have acted like that now.
>>> I do understand why our mothers have acted like that now.
Children could be everything in my life and I can sacrifice myself for them.
>>> My children are everything in my life, and I can sacrifice myself for them.
I don\'t think that only mothers are heroes, fathers are also heroes.
>>> correct!
I am always ready to do anything for my babies, and then they feel comfortable when I provide the help.
>>> I am always ready to do anything for my babies, so they would feel comfortable.
I would like to share the sad story about book of mother\'s love that I read few years ago.
>>> I would like to share a sad story about the book of mother\'s love that I read a few years ago.
Main character of novel is the mother who are suffering with cancer and she had a baby.
>>> The main characters of the novel were the mother who\'s suffering from cancer and her baby.
Sadly, She have to make a decision if she get a surgery to save her, if not she has to give up her baby.
>>> Sadly, she had to make a decision if she would have a surgery to save her life, or to give up her child.
However, she decide to deliver a baby instead of curing herself.
>>> However, she decided to deliver the baby instead of curing herself.
The power of mother\'s love is incredible, amazing and unbelievable.
>>> correct!
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