Explain your own perception of beauty?

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We all have our own perception of beauty, and it differs on our races. Apparently, people mostly appreciate beauty by physical appearance, but that wouldn\'t last because as soon as you get to know the person deeper. You\'ll realize that regardless of the appearance of a person, the personality will always leave a mark. Beauty fades, but the character will remain. Keep on writing!

~Teacher Eunice

The perception of beauty differ from person to person.

>>> The perception of beauty differs from person to person.

>>> OR: The perception of beauty may differ from each person. 

Many men in Korea consider woman who has slim body, big eyes with double-eyelid, white face and big breast as a beautiful lady.

>>> Many men in Korea consider a woman who has a slim body, big eyes with double-eyelids, white face, and big breast as a beautiful lady.  

All women always try to burn their fat even though they are slim and they get a lot of stress because they can not eat food enough.

>>> All women always try to burn their fat even though they are slim, and they get a lot of stress because they can not eat food enough. 

Every time women have a chance to eat something, they are finding an information about calories of the food and if it is high calorie food, they wouldn\'t take it.

>>> Every time that women have a chance to eat something, they are looking for the information about the calories of food, and if it is a high-calorie food, they wouldn\'t take it.

>>> Women are always trying to check the calorie content of food they consume by looking at the nutrition facts label at the back of the package.

I used to like a woman who meet the standard of beauty in Korea, but I have totally changed since I met many international friend.

>>> I used to like a woman who meets the standard of beauty in Korea, but I have changed totally since I met many foreign friend.

I thought Korean is the most beautiful lady in the world, but I realized that it is not true.

>>> I thought Korean women are the most beautiful in the world, but I realized that it is not true. 

Some who are big looks beautiful and it doesn\'t matter woman doesn\'t have big eyes, white skin etc.

>>> Some big people look beautiful and it doesn\'t really matter if a woman doesn\'t have big eyes, white skin, etc.

And I want to express my strong opinion that is appearance is nothing, one\'s personality is more import than others.

>>> I want to express my strong opinion, and that is appearance is nothing, one\'s personality is more import than others.