Explaination of the quote from Pope Francis. "War brings on war! Violence brings on violence.“

2013-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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First, I’d like to quote the physics law of action and reaction-the third of Newton’s laws. It means that forces always occur in pairs. I think this law is all around of our world. If someone strike the other, the other want to strike someone. If someone put in a good ward for the other, the other want to pur in a good ward for someone. It seems like simple logic. As a result, the quote from Pope Francis. “War brings on war! Violence brings on violence.” is that If someone uses violence, one of the others uses violence, too. In order to urges the worldwide to be no more war and violence, Pope said so.

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Good evening Steve! ^^ Wow, that was quite a composition. Really. And you even used physics to explain more of your side. That was really comprehensive enough. Great job! As I really agree with what you have said. For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. It really it is. I\'ll see you tomorrow! Have a good night sleep!   Always, Kathrine ^^       First, I’d like to quote the physics law of action and reaction-the third of Newton’s laws. >> correct! >> OR: First, I\'d like to quote the law of physics in action and reaction which is The Newton\'s Third Law of Motion.  It means that forces always occur in pairs. >> correct!  I think this law is all around of our world. >> I think this law is all around us. >> OR: I think this law is all around the word.  If someone strike the other, the other want to strike someone. >> If someone strikes the other, the other wants to strike the former. >> OR:  If someone strikes the other, the latter wants to strike the former. If someone put in a good ward for the other, the other want to pur in a good ward for someone. >> If someone puts a good ward for the other, the other will also put a good ward for that someone. >> OR: If someone puts a good ward for the other, the latter will also put a good ward for former. It seems like simple logic. >> It seems like  a   simple logic. As a result, the quote from Pope Francis. >> As a result is the quote from Pope Francis.  “War brings on war! Violence brings on violence. >> correct! ” is that If someone uses violence, one of the others uses violence, too. >>  That is: if someone uses violence, the other one will use violence too. In order to urges the worldwide to be no more war and violence, Pope said so. >> In order to urge the people worldwide that there will be no more war or violence,  as the Pope said so.  

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