Express my appreciation
학생이 쓴 원문
I think expressing appreciation after some events is a good culture. And it is a good way to maintain a good relationship. Sending a thank card or texting message is a simple and good way for busy people nowadays. But I prefer to call or meet and express my gratitude by giving some gifts or treating meals. Through the gathering, I find the relationship stronger.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree with you! Meeting them in person and treating them to meals can show that you are really sincere and that you truly appreciate what they\'ve done. It\'s also a nice way to strengthen relationships because you get to spend time with the people you value and who value you!
- T. Caitlyn
I think expressing appreciation after some events is a good culture.
>> I think expressing appreciation after events is a good practice.
And it is a good way to maintain a good relationship.
>> CORRECT
Sending a thank card or texting message is a simple and good way for busy people nowadays.
>> Sending a thank-you card or a text message is a simple and good way for busy people nowadays.
But I prefer to call or meet and express my gratitude by giving some gifts or treating meals.
>> But I prefer to call or meet in person and express my gratitude by giving gifts or treating them to a meal.
Through the gathering, I find the relationship stronger.
>> Through gatherings, I find that relationships become stronger.
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