Extra layers is a must today!

2024-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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Hi Kristine, It rained yesterday , sharp winds are dragging down feel-like temperatures today. I put on layers for going to somewhere. some patches of ice was on the road. I had to keep watching my step. HOMEWORK FOR 01/15: Writing Task: Do you prefer to eat in the same restaurant or explore new ones? I prefer to explore new restaurant. I usually cook at home. so when I want to eat in restaurant I want to try different food that I don\'t cook at home. and also I like to visit in different place.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!

Thanks for sharing your insights and stories. See you in class!

- Kristine ^^

Hi Kristine,

It rained yesterday ,

>> It rained yesterday.

sharp winds are dragging down feel-like temperatures today.

>> Today\'s temperature feels low due to the gusting winds.

I put on layers for going to somewhere.

>> I dressed in layers and head out somewhere.

some patches of ice was on the road.

>> The road has a few ice patches.

I had to keep watching my step.

>> I have to be conscious of my movements.

HOMEWORK FOR 01/15:
Writing Task: Do you prefer to eat in the same restaurant or explore new ones?

I prefer to explore new restaurant.

>> I prefer to explore new restaurants.
I usually cook at home.

>> Correct.

so when I want to eat in restaurant I want to try different food that I don\'t cook at home.

>> Therefore, I want to try new foods that I don\'t make at home when I eat out.
and also I like to visit in different place.

>> in addition I enjoy going to new places.

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