Extra-terrestrial intelligence exists. Agree or not? Explain your answer.

2018-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I agree with the assumption that extraterrestrial intelligence might exist. Since there are magical numbers of planets and stars in a solar system, there's the probability of the existence of extraterrestrial intelligence. Furthermore, similar patterns of radio waves have been observed continuously which we couldn't figure out. It led to keep the search for extraterrestrial intelligence(SETI) working since 1971. In addition, elements of meteorites came from somewhere in the universe reached on Earth are consist of elements of a solar system including the Earth. Those are the reasons why I believe extraterrestrial intelligence exists.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]~

Wow! That\'s very impressive.

Well, I agree with you. The universe is ginormous!

Also, it feels like you really like reading and watching documentaries concerning ET. Kkkk~

Thank you so much for sharing your spectacular opinion!

I\'ll see you tomorrow ♥

I agree with the assumption that extraterrestrial intelligence might exist.

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Since there are magical numbers of planets and stars in a solar system, there\'s the probability of the existence of extraterrestrial intelligence.

>> CORRECT

Furthermore, similar patterns of radio waves have been observed continuously which we couldn\'t figure out.

>> CORRECT

It led to keep the search for extraterrestrial intelligence(SETI) working since 1971.

>> CORRECT

In addition, elements of meteorites came from somewhere in the universe reached on Earth are consist of elements of a solar system including the Earth.

>> CORRECT

Those are the reasons why I believe extraterrestrial intelligence exists.

>> CORRECT

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