Extreme sports:
학생이 쓴 원문
Because extreme sports allow people to enjoy the thrill. People deliberately want to enjoy the thrill. That\'s why they watch thrilling movies, race, and visit haunted houses. Extreme sports are also done with that mindset.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
Because extreme sports allow people to enjoy the thrill.
>>> CORRECT!
People deliberately want to enjoy the thrill.
>>> CORRECT!
That\'s why they watch thrilling movies, race, and visit haunted houses.
>>> CORRECT!
Extreme sports are also done with that mindset.
>>> CORRECT!
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