Extroverts have more aspects than introverts

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I think Extroverts have more good things than introverts.

>> Did you mean: I think extroverts have more good things in them than introverts. 

Extroverts have strong point which is communication.

>> Did you mean: Extroverts have a strong point which is their communication skills. 

The basement of most works is communication.

>> Did you mean: The basic part of completing a task is through communication. 

If they have a problem, Extroverts can find out that.

>> If they have a problem, extroverts can find it out. 

So I think Introverts have weak point for that.

>> So I think introverts have a weak point in terms of communication.

but Introverts also have strong point.

>> But introverts also have a strong point. 

>> OR: But introverts also have a strength.

They are usually not a stubborn person

>> They are not a stubborn person. 

>> Better: They are not stubborn. 

They don\'t tend to intsist their opinion,  on the other hand, They listion coworkers opinion carefully.

>> They don\'t insist their opinions, they also listen to their co-workers opinion. 

>> OR: They don\'t only insist on what they believe in, they also listen to their co-workers opinion.