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2014-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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About the feedback on Thursday 11/18 #1 Your: 'Lately, what a neighbor means to me has become less of what it used to mean.'Can I change it to "The meaning of neighbor has become less of what it used to do"? #2 Why did you take S after neighbors? 10. It’s very important not to make my neighbors annoy specially at night. >> It's very important not to annoy my neighbor specially at night. #3 'It's 1)highly understandable/2) understandably(adverb.naturally) for the 1st world to always be busy I writed it down your saying. is is correct? #4 Friday feedback 12/19 10 Now we don't even talk with our neighbors but greet at least. >> Now we don't even talk to each other with our neighbors or say hello at least. to each other, with our neighbors. Aren't they redundant? Plus,I tried to mean '~but just greet at the most" #5 2.As compared to olden days when people lived in one neighborhood. >> Correct!Or: As compared a long time ago when people live closely in the neighborhood. live-> liveD right? #6 (I don't know where it comes, but you commented nth to this quetsion 5. I make the best of my freedom.> the best out of my freedom >>why 'out'?

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        Hello [이름]! Here are the answers to your queries. I hope that these help much in your understanding.   About the feedback on Thursday 11/18#1Your: \'Lately, what a neighbor means to me has become less of what it used to mean.\'Can I change it to \"The meaning of neighbor has become less of what it used to do\"? >> We cannot use \'do\' as a verb to receive the action of the \'meaning of a word\' because meanings have no life. Only things that have life can do: We can do it! ; The dog can do some tricks; etc. >> So you can retain it by saying: The meaning of neighbor has become less of what it used to.#2 Why did you take S after neighbors?10. It’s very important not to make my neighbors annoy specially at night.>> It\'s very important not to annoy my neighbor specially at night.>> Because the topic from the book talks about: \'Your Closest Neighbor\' which is singular in nature. So just make sure to stick to the first you have mentioned so that the noun/ subject will be consistent all through the discussion.#3 \'It\'s 1)highly understandable/2) understandably(adverb.naturally) for the 1st world to always be busy I writed it down your saying. is is correct?>> They are both correct. Also: highly understandably natural. The use of these depend much on the sentence patterns.#4 Friday feedback 12/1910 Now we don\'t even talk with our neighbors but greet at least. >> First of, this sentence is correct, I just failed to mark it correct on the grammar template.>> Now we don\'t even talk to each other with our neighbors or say hello at least.to each other, with our neighbors. Aren\'t they redundant? >> To repeat the idea of \'our neighbors\' is to call attention to the topic. When answering so that there is a recall to your discussion you repeat ideas specially the main idea for stress and emphasis.Plus,I tried to mean \'~but just greet at the most\">> Because in English, when you are not doing much which means \'most\' then you are doing a thing \'at least\'. Saying hello is the least you can do. This may sound weird but then if you want to say \'most\' then use the sentence: At the most, the best thing I can offer to my neighbor is a greeting.#5 2.As compared to olden days when people lived in one neighborhood.>> Correct!Or: As compared a long time ago when people live closely in the neighborhood.live-> liveD right?>> You are right here, it should be \'lived\'.#6 (I don\'t know where it comes, but you commented nth to this quetsion 5. I make the best of my freedom.> the best out of my freedom >>why \'out\'? >> You are correct in this sentence. The correct usage of \'out\' is in the idiom: make the best out of the worst situation. It was my mistake.

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