f you could celebrate your own birthday the way you wanted, what would you do? Where would you like
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I want to celebrating with my family, uncle and aunt. Because my other family members were congratulated from my uncle and aunt, but I didn\'t. And I\'d like invite to my house them.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Thank you for sending me your composition. I\'ll see you later in class. ^^
~Teacher Erin
>>I want to celebrate my birthday with my family and relatives.
Because my other family members were congratulated from my uncle and aunt,
>>Because my other family members were greeted by my uncle and aunt,
but I didn\'t.\\
>>CORRECT
And I\'d like invite to my house them.
>>And I\'d like to invite them to my house.
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