f you could have a conversation with any famous living person, who would you talk to? Why?
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If I could have a conversation with a famous person who is living, I would talk with Donald Trump the president of the United States. Of course, I didn\'t like him before I came here. But I didn\'t know he is such a stupid and crazy person. Nowadays, I hate and disgust him. Because of the coronavirus, I have been watching TV every day. He announces at 6 PM every night on Air to brief of the coronavirus in the United States. Watching TV more and more, I have known about him and why people dislike him. I think the spreading of the coronavirus here is because of \"Trump\". He said the coronavirus was not dangerous and might be a hoak(fake news). But it turns out that the coronavirus is very dangerous infected very quickly. He changed what he said earlier. He said He actually knew about the seriousness of the virus and He had prepared for 3 months. And He thought he had been doing well and he is the best person to cope with this problem. I would like to tell him this... \"What the fuck!\"
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1. If I could have a conversation with a famous person who is living, I would talk with Donald Trump the president of the United States.
>> CORRECT!
2. Of course, I didn\'t like him before I came here.
>> CORRECT!
3. But I didn\'t know he is such a stupid and crazy person.
>> CORRECT!
4. Nowadays, I hate and disgust him.
>> Nowadays, I hate him and he disgusts me.
5. Because of the coronavirus, I have been watching TV every day.
>> CORRECT!
6. He announces at 6 PM every night on Air to brief of the coronavirus in the United States.
>> He announces at 6 pm every night on air to brief people about the coronavirus in the United States.
7. Watching TV more and more, I have known about him and why people dislike him.
>> CORRECT!
8. I think the spreading of the coronavirus here is because of \"Trump\".
>> I think the spread of the coronavirus here is because of Trump.
OR: I think the spread of the coronavirus here is Trump\'s fault.
9. He said the coronavirus was not dangerous and might be a hoak(fake news).
>> He said the coronavirus was not dangerous and might be a hoax.
10. But it turns out that the coronavirus is very dangerous infected very quickly.
>> But it turns out that the coronavirus is very dangerous and it infects people very quickly.
11. He changed what he said earlier.
>> CORRECT!
12. He said He actually knew about the seriousness of the virus and He had prepared for 3 months.
>> CORRECT!
13. And He thought he had been doing well and he is the best person to cope with this problem.
>> CORRECT!
14. I would like to tell him this... \"What the fuck!\"
>> CORRECT!
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