f you could take a vacation anywhere in the world for any length of time, where would you go?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could take a vacation anywhere in the world, I would like to go Switzerland.
I\'ve seen a beautiful picture of a mountain in Switzerland and I felt a peaceful emotion when I saw the scenery.
I want to see the beautiful scenery in person and I guess that greenery scenery makes my eyes and mind comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. I hope you are doing well. Thank you for doing your homework. I do wish and hope you could go to Switzerland someday. Good luck! I will talk to you in class. ~Jane c\",)
If I could take a vacation anywhere in the world, I would like to go Switzerland.
>>> If I could take a vacation anywhere in the world, I would like to go to Switzerland.
I\'ve seen a beautiful picture of a mountain in Switzerland and I felt a peaceful emotion when I saw the scenery.
>>> I have seen a beautiful picture of a mountain in Switzerland and I felt peace/ calmness/ satisfaction when I saw the scenery.
I want to see the beautiful scenery in person and I guess that greenery scenery makes my eyes and mind comfortable.
>>> I want to see the beautiful scenery in person and I guess that a green scenery makes my eyes and mind comfortable.
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