Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication,
학생이 쓴 원문
I think using massage application is better than face to face communication.
Since we can type our conversation anytime and every where. Also we can consider other people before communicate with someone. we can correct our word. Moreover ewe can express our feeling using emotional sticker. If we communicate face to face, we can't hide our emotion.
so I think using message App is better than face to face communication.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! ^^
Thank you for your insight about the topic and I definitely agree. ^^
You would be surprised that \"emoticon\" is already an accepted word because of the digital age and yes, these things are useful in messenger applications when showing is better than saying. ^^
Good work in the essay; most of the corrections is reiteration of some words used.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I think using massage application is better than face to face communication.Since we can type our conversation anytime and every where.>> I think using messenger applications is better than face to face communication since we can type out our conversation anytime and anywhere.
Also we can consider other people before communicate with someone. we can correct our word.
>> Also, we can consider who we are communicating with beforehand and we can correct ourselves.
Moreover ewe can express our feeling using emotional sticker. If we communicate face to face, we can\'t hide our emotion. >> Moreover, we can express our feelings using emoticons unlike in communicating face to face where we can\'t hide our emotions.so I think using message App is better than face to face communication.
>> This is why I think using messenger applications is better than face to face communication.
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