Failure is the mother of success.
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When we fail or feel discouragement, we usually think about its reason. \'What makes it fail?\' \'Which part is wrong or lack?\' \"What should I do for future not to fail or discourage?\' like these. Through this process we can develope one step.
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Failure is the mother of success.
When we fail or feel discouragement, we usually think about its reason.
>> When we fail or feel discouraged, we usually think about its reason.
\'What makes it fail?\' \'Which part is wrong or lack?\' \"What should I do for future not to fail or discourage?\' like these.
>> For example, \"What made it fail?\" \"Where did I go wrong or which part is lacking?\" or \"What should I do in the future to avoid failure or discouragement?\"
Through this process we can develope one step.
>> Through this process, we can develop/ improve/ get better.
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