Failure makes me better!
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a saying that the failure is the mother of success.
When we fail something, we will be upset and frustrated at first.
However, if we take a rest for a while and think about it, we would know why we failed.
So I am not afraid of failures, because the experiences of them and the time of endurance make me better.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Another good point!
You really know how to express different principles.
Take note of your prepositions.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There is a saying that the failure is the mother of success.
>> There is a saying that failure is the mother of success.
When we fail something, we will be upset and frustrated at first.
When we fail something, we will be upset and frustrated at first.
>> When we fail at something, we will be upset and frustrated at first.
However, if we take a rest for a while and think about it, we would know why we failed.
However, if we take a rest for a while and think about it, we would know why we failed.
>> Correct
So I am not afraid of failures, because the experiences of them and the time of endurance make me better.
So I am not afraid of failures, because the experiences of them and the time of endurance make me better.
>> So I am not afraid of failures because the experience I get from them and the period of endurance make me better.
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