Failures is just a beginning for your goal.

Happy Thursday [이름]!

Thank you for finding time to do your homework. I really appreciate all the effort. ^.^

I revise some of your sentences. I hope these will help you.

Have a great day ahead and see you tomorrow!

~Teacher Rain~

Yes, i do. There is a such a saying. 

>>Yes I do. There is such a saying.
 \'Failure is but the threshold of success\'.

>>CORRECT
 I think failures is a process of growing up and needed to succeed for your goal.

>>I think failure is the process of growing up and it\'s needed to succeed in your goal.
 In my case, i\'ve studied English from last year and now i improved my English skill a lot!(Just my opinion).

>>In my case, I\'ve studied English last year until now and I\'ve improved my skill in English a lot.

But when i started to study in another country, it was very difficult to speck English everyday and i couldn\'t have a conversation with my flat mates so we had trouble sometimes.

>>But when I started to study in another country, it was very difficult to speak in English every day. I couldn\'t have a conversation with my flat mates (?)  so we had trouble sometimes.

I was going to give up studying and that life.

>>CORRECT

But i put a spell \'It\'s just a beginning\', \'This too shall pass!\'

>>CORRECT

maybe this was good a spell for me.

>>Maybe this was a good spell for me.
 Now i still continue to study English and that experiences of failures will be motive when i start something in my life.

>>Now I sill continue to study English and those experiences of failures will become my motivation when I start something in my life.

I will remember the suffering and can overcome anything.

>>I will remember those sufferings and I know that I can overcome anything.