fairytale
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Hi, A-Rim! Thank you for your wonderful recommendation and insight. I really love that movie, too!
~ Teacher Marie
I want to recommend ‘Frozen’.
>> CORRECT.
It is a story about Elsa and his sister Anna.
>> It is a story about Elsa and her sister, Anna.
When I was watched it, I was touched because relationsip between Elsa and Anna is so fraternal.
>> When I watched it, I was touched because the relationship between Elsa and Anna is so familial.
OR: When I watched it, I was touched because Elsa and Anna\'s relationship as sisters is so strong.
So, if you have a bad relationship with your siblings, it is good for you.
>> CORRECT.
OR: So, if you have a bad relationship with your siblings, it would be good for you to watch.
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