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학생이 쓴 원문
People are comforted and mistaken owing to fake and clever VIP games.
I am upset their stupid and ignorant delusion.
If we have high self-esteem, we don\'t fooled like vulgar commercial trick.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
You have a very good point! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Aki~
People are comforted and mistaken owing to fake and clever VIP games.
>>> People are often comforted and misled by fake and deceptive VIP schemes
I am upset their stupid and ignorant delusion.
>>> I am upset by their stupid and ignorant delusion.
>>> I’m upset by their naive and ignorant beliefs
If we have high self-esteem, we don\'t fooled like vulgar commercial trick.
>>> If we have high self-esteem, we won’t be fooled by such shallow commercial tricks
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