fake news.

2019-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Fake news is false information that is made to look like true media coverage ; thus, it is false news in the form of news with only a bit of factual information. According to the numerous fake news, it\'s not just a recent problem ; however, with the development of the Internet and the rapid proliferation of social networking services, fake news is becoming a bigger social issue than in the past. One of the key implications of fake news as social issues is the increasing number of fake news that not only journalists but individuals spread using social network services. It\'s also a problem that, regardless of the authenticity of the news, the speed of the spread is getting faster, and the influence of the news which is reported is big enough to dominate the political arena. Although there are opinions that the government needs legal sanctions to address this issue, it is not easy to set clear standards for \"false\" in reality.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Jenny,

Like I told you earlier, the grammar and organization of your essay are just right.  May I suggest though that you should make your own sentences on your next essay. This easy is obviously from the internet and so your professor might comment on that tomorrow. Try to relax tomorrow. Don\'t be scared of your teacher.(\",)

~Lynn

Fake news is false information that is made to look like true media coverage; thus, it is false news in the form of news with only a bit of factual information.

>> correct!

According to the numerous fake news, it\'s not just a recent problem; however, with the development of the Internet and the rapid proliferation of social networking services, fake news is becoming a bigger social issue than in the past.

>> correct!

One of the key implications of fake news as social issues is the increasing number of fake news that not only journalists but individuals spread using social network services.

>> One of the key implications of fake news, as social issues is the increasing number of fake news that not only journalists but individuals spread using social network services.

 It\'s also a problem that, regardless of the authenticity of the news, the speed of the spread is getting faster, and the influence of the news which is reported is big enough to dominate the political arena.

>> correct!

Although there are opinions that the government needs legal sanctions to address this issue, it is not easy to set clear standards for \"false\" in reality.

>> correct!

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