Fake news.
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Fake news is an emerging issue in the contemporary world that alters our lives considerably in both political and social aspects. For one, some politicians are proactively voicing particular kinds of misinformation in order to utilize them in favor of their political goals. A political party intentionally come up with fake news to undermine the foundation of a competing party, enabling it to circulate in public via various forms of media. This is such an inconsiderate and irresponsible action to take, considering how significant politicians\' influence is on a certain society. Closely related to that, fake news exacerbates social cleavages within a society since different groups of population are likely to be exposed to dramatically different information on communal matters. If this situation goes further to the extent that no one could be sure of what is right or wrong, people will feed on what is suitable for their predisposition, making it more difficult to achieve social solidarity.
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Hi Drexel! Nice work here! I like it. Thank you! ^ ^
I totally agree with you. It\'s sad to think that this is the reaity in our world today. It\'s difficult to decipher information and news today as people have ways to manipulate or even twist facts into their favor.
-Teacher Jedah
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For one, some politicians are proactively voicing particular kinds of misinformation in order to utilize them in favor of their political goals.
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A political party intentionally come up with fake news to undermine the foundation of a competing party, enabling it to circulate in public via various forms of media.
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This is such an inconsiderate and irresponsible action to take, considering how significant politicians\' influence is on a certain society.
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Closely related to that, fake news exacerbates social cleavages within a society since different groups of population are likely to be exposed to dramatically different information on communal matters.
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If this situation goes further to the extent that no one could be sure of what is right or wrong, people will feed on what is suitable for their predisposition, making it more difficult to achieve social solidarity.
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