falling in fall

2012-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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It was summer time last month. Now breeze tells me that the autumn already comes. It's chilly outside. And I'm still working on something inside my lab. The sky is getting higher such as falling in fall deeper and deeper. Even though the sky is higher, the sky is the limit. I can touch the sky if I punch the sky.

강사 첨삭

A very Chilly Thursday!^^ Thank you so much in submitting your creative composition. I admire how you describe the sky.^^ In our place, it is also beginning to feel cold. This is because of the cool northeast winds. Can you also feel that Christmas is getting near again?^^ See you again! -T.Nica It was summer time last month. >>CORRECT! Now breeze tells me that the autumn already comes. >>The breeze tells me now that autumn had already came. It\'s chilly outside. >>CORRECT! And I\'m still working on something inside my lab. >>CORRECT!The sky is getting higher such as falling in fall deeper and deeper. >>The sky is getting higher and  it goes deeper and deeper. Even though the sky is higher, the sky is the limit. >>CORRECT! I can touch the sky if I punch the sky. >>CORRECT!

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