Falling stars

2021-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. what is your wish in life? A.I have two wish now one is I don’t get COVID-19 the other is the development of a dog’s heart disease drug because sarang(my dog) has heart disease.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! I am glad that you answered your homework. Thank you for being participative all the time. I hope that your dog will get well very soon. 

- Teacher Sophia


I have two wish now one is I don’t get COVID-19 the other is the development of a dog’s heart disease drug because sarang(my dog) has heart disease.

>> I have two wishes. One, I wish that I won\'t be infected by COVID-19. And second, I wish to have a dog heart disease drug because my dog has a heart disease.

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