false excuse experience
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually try to be a honest and don\'t make false excuse. Despite this, I had made that sometimes when I worked in last company.
I\'m not sure exact situation what I faced, It happened 3years ago. I was working in military service in Incheon of Korea.
I tried to get abroad trip. So, I needed some sort of reasons why I have to go to there. So I lied to my senior manager.
After that I took a trip successfully. but, I had to make more false excuse for covering my first excuse.
It made me feel bad. Now, I definitely realised about that. If I make some false excuse, It will make more false and fake excuses.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this one. I definitely agree and admire your values. We can not cover up a lie with another lie. It\'s always a good thing to just be honest with the things you say and do. You know what they say\" “Integrity is telling myself the truth. And honesty is telling the truth to other people.” ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I usually try to be a honest and don\'t make false excuse.
>>I always usually try to be honest and not make false excuses.
Despite this, I had made that sometimes when I worked in last company.
>>Despite this, I did that sometimes with the last company I worked with.
I\'m not sure exact situation what I faced, It happened 3years ago.
I\'m not sure exact situation what I faced, It happened 3years ago.
>>I\'m not quite sure about the exact situation that I was in three years ago.
I was working in military service in Incheon of Korea.
>>I was working in the military service in Incheon, Korea.
I tried to get abroad trip.
I tried to get abroad trip.
>>I tried to get a trip abroad.
So, I needed some sort of reasons why I have to go to there.
>>So, I needed some sort of reasons why I have to go there.
So I lied to my senior manager.
>>CORRECT
After that I took a trip successfully.
After that I took a trip successfully.
>>After that, I was able to successfully get that trip.
but, I had to make more false excuse for covering my first excuse.
>>But, in order to do so, I made false excuses to cover up my first lie.
It made me feel bad.
It made me feel bad.
>>CORRECT
Now, I definitely realised about that.
>>CORRECT (misspelled \"realized\")
If I make some false excuse, It will make more false and fake excuses.
>>If I make one false excuse, it will definitely lead to more lies and excuses.
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