Family
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Theme: [Creative Writing] In not more than three to five (3-5) sentences, explain or state the importance of \'family\' in your life.
My family bring up me.
My Mom give birth to me.
My family likes me and care me.
My family give me money.
I like my family!
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My family bring up me.
>>> My family raises me.
My Mom give birth to me.
My Mom give birth to me.
>>> My mom gave birth to me.
My family likes me and care me.
My family likes me and care me.
>>> My family likes me and takes care of me.
My family give me money.
My family give me money.
>>> My family gives me money.
I like my family!
I like my family!
>>> CORRECT
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