family
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My family is a motive power of my life. I think our family is more connected than other families. If one of the family members goes through something, everyone listens and sympathizes with it. So my family has a lot of conversation. The reason why I don\'t get lonely easily seems to be because I have a good family. So my family is the most precious thing to me.
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Hi Yeong! ^^
I hope that your family is the same with other families. You guys are inspiring. :)
My family is a motive power of my life.
>> My family is my motivation in life.
I think our family is more connected than other families.
>> CORRECT
If one of the family members goes through something, everyone listens and sympathizes with it.
>> If a family member goes through something, everyone listens and sympathizes with him/her.
So my family has a lot of conversation.
>> So my family have a lot of conversation with one another.
The reason why I don\'t get lonely easily seems to be because I have a good family.
>> We do this in order to not get anyone lonely. This what makes my family good.
So my family is the most precious thing to me.
>> That is why my family is the most precious thing to me.
>> That is why my family is the most precious thing to me.
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