Family

Jay,

You did a good job with your homework today. You\'re amazing! Keep it up!(\",)

~Lynn

Family is the most important being to everyone.

>> correct!

 As the human is different with other animals, we couldn\'t walk alone just after being borned.

>> As human is different from other animals, we couldn\'t walk alone just after being born.

We are so weak and don\'t have power to live alone so the family is necessary.

>> We are so weak and we don\'t have power to live alone so the family is necessary.

 In addition, the children can learn about the basic relationship with other people from family.

>> In addition, the children can learn about the basic relationship with other people from their family.

 So I think the one who has siblings has more social personalities than the only child.

>> So I think the one who has siblings is more sociable than an only child.

Since they were young, they could learn about the considerate personalities from argument and fight with siblings.

>> Since they were young, they could learn about being considerate from arguments and fights with their siblings.

Like this, the family is imporatant to everyone, but there must be someone who don\'t have family.

>> Like this, the family is imporatant to everyone, but there are people who don\'t have families.

The society has to concern about these people and must makes several schemes.

>> The society has to be concerned about these people and we must make several schemes for them.

I think giving many chances to make their own groups like family is good to support them.

>> I think giving many chances for them to make their own group like family is a good way to support them.