‘Family’
학생이 쓴 원문
means warming to me. When i have a fault, My family scolded me. But They forgiven me soon. And I find sacrifice when i think about ‘Family’. Almost our family give everything to us.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about \'family\'.
I really appreciate it. ^^
I\'m glad to see that you are improving really well when you are submitting your compositions.
Keep it up. Just always be reminded that whenever we write \'I\', it will always be in a capital letter. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
When I have a fault, my family scolded me.
>> CORRECT.
But they forgiven me soon.
>> CORRECT.
And I find sacrifice when I think about ‘Family’.
>> CORRECT.
Almost our family give everything to us.
>> Our family gives everything to us most of the time.
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