Family chores
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I don\'t know the word \"chores\". So I looked uu the dictionary and I acknowledge the mean.
Chores of my family is for me. Sometimes my wife is washing dishies and cook the food. But the others are for me. I do the cleaning and disposeble food. Fixing something, buying coffee & bread, water plants and so on.
When I marriaged beginning, I didn\'t like to do. But I enjoy it enough. That is my keeping peace of my house with happy.
강사 첨삭
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Here are your corrections:
Dear [Name],
I don\'t know the word \"chores\".
I don\'t know the word \"chores\".
>> CORRECT
So I looked uu the dictionary and I acknowledge the mean.
>> So I looked it up in a dictionary and found out the meaning.
Chores of my family is for me.
>> (I\'m not sure what you meant here.)
>> The chores of my family are good for me.
Sometimes my wife is washing dishies and cook the food. But the others are for me.
>> Sometimes my wife is washing the dishes and cooking the food but I do the other chores.
I do the cleaning and disposeble food.
>> I clean and dispose the leftover food.
Fixing something, buying coffee & bread, water plants and so on.
>> I fix things, buy coffee and bread, water the plants and so on.
When I marriaged beginning, I didn\'t like to do. But I enjoy it enough.
>> When my marriage was just beginning, I didn\'t like chores but as it goes on, I began enjoying it.
That is my keeping peace of my house with happy.
>> Those are keeping the peace in my house and the happiness.
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